六年级孩子对着作文题发呆，通常不是没学过，是不知道第一句写什么。背范文没用，下次换个题目照样卡住。真正管用的办法，是给他一个能自己搭骨架的方法：五个问题，答完就是一篇短文。
五个问题，答完就是一篇
以“My Weekend”为例，按顺序问：
1. When? I had a busy weekend.
2. Where? I went to the park on Saturday.
3. Who? I went there with my parents.
4. What? We played basketball and took some photos.
5. How did you feel? I felt happy.
五个答案连起来，把重复的地方合并，就是成稿：
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday, I went to the park with my parents. We played basketball and took some photos. We had a good time, and I felt very happy.
看出来没有：不需要难词，也不需要背句型，就是把五个短答拼顺。孩子自己拼出来的，才记得住。
同一种骨架，能套到常考的题目上
- My School Day（写日常，用一般现在时）：I usually get up at seven. I go to school by bus. My favourite subject is PE because I like sports. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. I feel tired but happy.
- My Friend（写人物，把五个问题换成：长什么样、喜欢什么、常一起做什么）：He is tall and thin. He likes reading. We often play football together after school.
- My Favourite Season（写景+活动）：I like spring best. It is warm and sunny. I can fly a kite with my friends in the park.
换题目不换骨架：时间、地点/对象、人物、活动、感受，五个格子填满，短文就不会空。
从五句扩到七八句，只加三样东西
五句能及格，想再往上走，给他三个小工具：
- 加一个细节：played basketball 后面补一句比分或趣事，We won the game at last. 画面立刻具体了；
- 加一个原因：I like PE because it makes me strong. 因为句是六年级最划算的加分句；
- 加一个连接词：把两句用 and、but、so 连起来，句子长了，分数也跟着长。I was tired, but I was happy.
六年级最常见的六个错误，先盯这几个
1. “I go to the park yesterday.”→“I went to the park yesterday.”看见 yesterday、last week，动词就要变过去式；
2. “Played basketball with friends.”→“I played basketball with my friends.”口头说话可以省主语，写作文不行，每句都要有主语；
3. “I very like basketball.”→“I really like basketball.”这是逐字翻译中文最典型的一坑；
4. “My hobby is play basketball.”→“My hobby is playing basketball.”hobby 后面要用 -ing；
5. “He good at English.”→“He is good at English.”句子里别忘了 be 动词；
6. “I am happy today, I played with friends.”时态要统一：一篇讲昨天的事，就从头到尾用过去式，别跳来跳去。
七天这样练，一天一步
- 第1天：口头回答五个问题，先说出来，不写；
- 第2天：读懂“My Weekend”这篇，划出五个问题的答案分别在哪；
- 第3天：换个人物和地点，仿写一遍；
- 第4天：专查主语和 be 动词，逐句念一遍；
- 第5天：写“My School Day”，注意换成现在时；
- 第6天：把自己的作文读出声，删掉重复句，补一个细节句；
- 第7天：合上范文，换一个题目独立写五到七句。
家长检查卡，交卷前过一遍
- 五个问题都答了吗（时间、地点、人物、活动、感受）；
- 每句话都有主语吗；
- 时间词和动词时态对得上吗；
- 有没有一句 because 撑起来的原因句；
- 结尾是感受句收的吗；
- 大小写和句号，有没有漏。
最后提醒一句：刚开始写得慢、写得短都正常。五句写稳，比硬凑十句流水账强——先求对，再求多，这是六年级到初一最稳的衔接节奏。
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